Mr.Colletti i really wanted to print this but my printer wont work please give me a few days to print it ill copy paste it here but give u the really one when i can. PLZ
IS237 Burraue Khattak 802 9/30/08 The Note
I walked home from school minding my own business when I saw my apartment door open. The door never used to be open except when someone knocked on the door to come in. from the distance I saw the inside of my home. It was empty, untouched, and dead quit. It felt really weird, like someone just snuck in or wanted me to come in. I ran inside with my fists tightened, ready to hit someone. Then I noticed a note, sitting on the floor on the floor near some open magazines and a scissor. I read the note and it said "If you want your family back come to the alley near the park on Fulton Street at midnight, with family safe that only you no the combination to, AND DON’T BE LATE!!!." If you want your family back come to the alley near the park on Fulton Street at midnight, with family safe that only you no the combination to, AND DON’T BE LATE!!!. My heart was about to burst. My mind was racing. I blacked out for a few hours. I ran to the clock and it read “10:56 pm”. I still had time. I quickly ran to the antique family safe and took out everything in it and placed it in a bag. I never really opened it before and didn’t want to but now it was the time. I noticed a magnum laying at the bottom of the safe. I never seen it there before. I noticed it looked new and as if someone put it there recently. I put it in my pocket and waited till 11:45pm. I ran outside with the bag and magnum ready in my hands. It felt weird walking around with an illegal gun in one hand priceless family jewels and ornaments in another. I ran to Fulton street and stopped. I thought struck my mind “How am I supposed to kill people who have my family hostage alone at age 13!” I said to myself “I will do whatever it takes to get them back”. I ran into the alley and then someone touched my shoulder from behind and screamed “GOCHYA!” My heart stopped. The air was sucked out of my lungs. Then my body warmed up with anger and I yelled “WHAT!, this was all a joke” I asked “but the gun and the letter?”. My friends and my family came out from there hiding places and said “April fools!”. “We bought that gun from the toy store and we made the letter ourselves”. I felt so relieved. And we all walked home together.
I have been working at I.S. 237 for Twelve years. I started teaching here in September of 1999. I enjoy teaching English Language Arts. I have taught grades six, seven, eight and nine. This site is intended for the writing responses to the novel HATCHET
12 comments:
Its okay!
PLEASE just give us homework on thursday!! i need to do something
lol awww i wanted homework
its ok
ily mr colletti!! thx for no hw
Where is the homework Mr. colletti? i really am beginning to miss it!!!
no hw that sucks i dont have anything to do either
it ok, i understood it. also i agree with u 8088. i do miss the homework too. it just that no homework it better!!
ps-i am too lazy..ha ha
I agree with anonymous im starting to miss hw already.we understand you Mr. colletti.
Mr.Colletti i really wanted to print this but my printer wont work please give me a few days to print it ill copy paste it here but give u the really one when i can. PLZ
IS237 Burraue Khattak
802 9/30/08
The Note
I walked home from school minding my own business when I saw my apartment door open. The door never used to be open except when someone knocked on the door to come in. from the distance I saw the inside of my home. It was empty, untouched, and dead quit. It felt really weird, like someone just snuck in or wanted me to come in.
I ran inside with my fists tightened, ready to hit someone. Then I noticed a note, sitting on the floor on the floor near some open magazines and a scissor. I read the note and it said "If you want your family back come to the alley near the park on Fulton Street at midnight, with family safe that only you no the combination to, AND DON’T BE LATE!!!."
If you want your family back come to the alley near the park on Fulton Street at midnight, with family safe that only you no the combination to, AND DON’T BE LATE!!!.
My heart was about to burst. My mind was racing.
I blacked out for a few hours. I ran to the clock and it read “10:56 pm”. I still had time. I quickly ran to the antique family safe and took out everything in it and placed it in a bag. I never really opened it before and didn’t want to but now it was the time. I noticed a magnum laying at the bottom of the safe. I never seen it there before.
I noticed it looked new and as if someone put it there recently. I put it in my pocket and waited till 11:45pm. I ran outside with the bag and magnum ready in my hands. It felt weird walking around with an illegal gun in one hand priceless family jewels and ornaments in another. I ran to Fulton street and stopped.
I thought struck my mind “How am I supposed to kill people who have my family hostage alone at age 13!” I said to myself “I will do whatever it takes to get them back”. I ran into the alley and then someone touched my shoulder from behind and screamed “GOCHYA!” My heart stopped. The air was sucked out of my lungs.
Then my body warmed up with anger and I yelled “WHAT!, this was all a joke” I asked “but the gun and the letter?”. My friends and my family came out from there hiding places and said “April fools!”. “We bought that gun from the toy store and we made the letter ourselves”. I felt so relieved. And we all walked home together.
The Note
By:Burraque Khattak 802
everyone is so funny its ok i thought there was going to be homework oh i frogot it was fridays duh! amyway see you tomorrow
this is a totally different date but where is the hw? it is monday not tuesday.
hi
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